Underground City

Loved the theme and concept of the game. The use of Quest systems and dialogue systems has enhanced the gameplay. The art style of the match has watched my eye, especially the Player of the game. I loved the animations used throughout the game. While playing, I had a few issues; getting onto the platforms was a bit hard I believe this was due to the jumps; when falling from a platform, camera movement looks too quick, and when you move onto the next platform, I was stuck between two platforms. Overall I loved the game and the systems used. 

This game has a fun art style, and the controls are fun and simple to understand. The character are also designed great, they remind me a little of those toads from Mario. The story was also simple but that's an okay direction to take, as many games have simple stories but are known world-wide: Mario Bros and Shovel Knight come to mind. 

A few nit-picks I found was that the text can be scrambled by rapidly pressing T to activate and deactivate the text boxes; and that you can gain a lot of air by jumping then jumping against off the NPCs, Which I think is not what you were going for as it does look kind of goofy. Another drawback that I think is a serious glitch, is that once you get to the upper world, you can get stuck between the platforms - and I cannot get unstuck, causing me to force the game to close.